Yao Yao (夭夭) Short Story Collection: Review
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Yao Yao is a collection of short stories with historical settings, each featuring a central relationship between a human and a, well, yao (妖, often loosely translated as demon, spirit, etc). To avoid setting off the little voice in my head that keeps going 'but they aren't exactly demons or have a one-to-one analogue to supernatural beings in the Anglo world', I'm just going to carry on calling them yao for the duration of this review.
Most of the stories in the collection have tragic or bittersweet endings. Because I'm Old (and am well past my mournful 'literary youth' phase), my favourites were two stories with unambiguously happy endings: 'Carry Me to the Heights of Success' (请君为我步青云, pinyin: qing jun wei wo bu qingyun) by Liuli Wangguan (琉璃王冠, literally 'crystal crown'), where a lazy cat yao and a layabout scholar do their level best to sponge off each other (the cat yao also ends up opening the fantasy Chinese version of a cat cafe at one point, which was brilliant), and 'The White Pigeon' (白鸽, pinyin: baige) by Renjian Feiliao (人间废料, literally 'mortal dross'), where a girl escapes her rich and oppressive family with the aid of her newest stepmother, a pigeon yao. The latter is heavier in tone and subject matter than the former (and also has some nicely creepy scenes), but still has moments of levity (mostly courtesy of the pigeon yao's himbo brother).
Of the stories with tragic endings, the two I liked best were 'At the Fourth Tolling of the Bell' (第四响, pinyin: di si xiang) by Qingjiu Yi Dao (清酒一刀), literally 'wine and a slash of the blade/a blade'), about a rabbit yao who tries to reverse the fate of a human girl with great cultivator potential, and ends up paying a heavy price for it, and 'Sorry, Little Snake' (小蛇勿怪, pinyin: xiao she wu guai) by A-Sheng and Xiaoshan (阿生和小山, though I'm not sure whether they're actually two people or just one person who happens to have chosen a pseudonym that makes them sound like two people) about a green snake yao who plots revenge on the swordswoman who injured her, only to realise too late that it was all part of a plot to assassinate the malevolent emperor. The latter also contains quite apposite references to the well-known legend of the white snake
Of the other stories, 'The Light of Ten Thousand Households' (万户人间, pinyin: wan hu renjian) by Yan Zhong (檐中, literally 'in the eaves') and 'Mount Changming' (常明, pinyin: chang ming) by Zhu Yixuan (朱奕璇) I thought were fine, but both had an inscrutable near-goddess type being as one half of the relationship, and I usually find those hard to get invested in. 'The Beginning of the Tribulation' (大劫之始, pinyin: da jie zhi shi) by Jiu Mo Jun (九墨君) and 'Worldly Thoughts' (思凡, pinyin: sifan) by Qingzhou Congshi (青州从事, literally 'official of Qingzhou') did some interesting things with historical and mythological figures (in the former case, imperial consort Su Daji, who is often portrayed as a malevolent fox yao in folklore; in the latter case, the Jade Rabbit, Chang'e's pet and companion on the moon), but I felt they were a bit uneven and needed clearer direction. The same critique also applies to The Hawthorn Tree (山楂树, pinyin: shanzha shu) by Jian Xue (溅雪, literally 'spilled snow'), about an empress and a very young, very new imperial consort who doesn't seem to appreciate the gravity of the situation she's in. 'Lady Kite' (as in, both the bird and the toy; 鸢娘) by Helan Xie (贺兰邪) had some intriguing world-building. The protagonist is an indentured servant in an establishment that grants people their dearest wish in exchange for their souls, which are then made into kites. However, it felt a bit overstuffed — there were too many ideas going on in it, which meant most of them ended up under-developed.
Since this is a print-first collection, with no online equivalent, none of the stories is expressly romantic (nobody actually says 'I love you' out loud, etc), but it would take a huge act of reading in bad faith to interpret them as anything other than that.
(This is a very brief review because I am Tired due to Life, but please feel free to ask me for more details of the stories you're interested in!)
Most of the stories in the collection have tragic or bittersweet endings. Because I'm Old (and am well past my mournful 'literary youth' phase), my favourites were two stories with unambiguously happy endings: 'Carry Me to the Heights of Success' (请君为我步青云, pinyin: qing jun wei wo bu qingyun) by Liuli Wangguan (琉璃王冠, literally 'crystal crown'), where a lazy cat yao and a layabout scholar do their level best to sponge off each other (the cat yao also ends up opening the fantasy Chinese version of a cat cafe at one point, which was brilliant), and 'The White Pigeon' (白鸽, pinyin: baige) by Renjian Feiliao (人间废料, literally 'mortal dross'), where a girl escapes her rich and oppressive family with the aid of her newest stepmother, a pigeon yao. The latter is heavier in tone and subject matter than the former (and also has some nicely creepy scenes), but still has moments of levity (mostly courtesy of the pigeon yao's himbo brother).
Of the stories with tragic endings, the two I liked best were 'At the Fourth Tolling of the Bell' (第四响, pinyin: di si xiang) by Qingjiu Yi Dao (清酒一刀), literally 'wine and a slash of the blade/a blade'), about a rabbit yao who tries to reverse the fate of a human girl with great cultivator potential, and ends up paying a heavy price for it, and 'Sorry, Little Snake' (小蛇勿怪, pinyin: xiao she wu guai) by A-Sheng and Xiaoshan (阿生和小山, though I'm not sure whether they're actually two people or just one person who happens to have chosen a pseudonym that makes them sound like two people) about a green snake yao who plots revenge on the swordswoman who injured her, only to realise too late that it was all part of a plot to assassinate the malevolent emperor. The latter also contains quite apposite references to the well-known legend of the white snake
Of the other stories, 'The Light of Ten Thousand Households' (万户人间, pinyin: wan hu renjian) by Yan Zhong (檐中, literally 'in the eaves') and 'Mount Changming' (常明, pinyin: chang ming) by Zhu Yixuan (朱奕璇) I thought were fine, but both had an inscrutable near-goddess type being as one half of the relationship, and I usually find those hard to get invested in. 'The Beginning of the Tribulation' (大劫之始, pinyin: da jie zhi shi) by Jiu Mo Jun (九墨君) and 'Worldly Thoughts' (思凡, pinyin: sifan) by Qingzhou Congshi (青州从事, literally 'official of Qingzhou') did some interesting things with historical and mythological figures (in the former case, imperial consort Su Daji, who is often portrayed as a malevolent fox yao in folklore; in the latter case, the Jade Rabbit, Chang'e's pet and companion on the moon), but I felt they were a bit uneven and needed clearer direction. The same critique also applies to The Hawthorn Tree (山楂树, pinyin: shanzha shu) by Jian Xue (溅雪, literally 'spilled snow'), about an empress and a very young, very new imperial consort who doesn't seem to appreciate the gravity of the situation she's in. 'Lady Kite' (as in, both the bird and the toy; 鸢娘) by Helan Xie (贺兰邪) had some intriguing world-building. The protagonist is an indentured servant in an establishment that grants people their dearest wish in exchange for their souls, which are then made into kites. However, it felt a bit overstuffed — there were too many ideas going on in it, which meant most of them ended up under-developed.
Since this is a print-first collection, with no online equivalent, none of the stories is expressly romantic (nobody actually says 'I love you' out loud, etc), but it would take a huge act of reading in bad faith to interpret them as anything other than that.
(This is a very brief review because I am Tired due to Life, but please feel free to ask me for more details of the stories you're interested in!)